Hero of the Mountain.
This is story of real hero.
This fox's name is Bubu.
One day he saw knew about big contest "Hero of the mountain"in next day.
He thing wanted see the contest and see bravest and most powerful more than anyone else.
That evening, he could not fall asleep till late at night because he was looking at the next day.
And next day, he leave for mountain.
He helped many animals on my way to go peak at last.He was a kindness.
But, when he climbed the peak at last, the contest was over.
He just missed the contest.He couldn't see who is hero.
He was in very low spirits.
And sudden,there came into existence an owl.
This owl was gazing at an action of Bubu all the way.
This owl said ''You are the real hero of the mountain.
I read this story, and I looking back upon.
If I was Bubu, It may not do seem Bubu.
I want to conduct that quite considerate.
And I want to endeavour behavior that proudly.
No matter how everyone not see it.
Hero of the Mountain by Lvan Parvov
21 page
Hi Arisa,
返信削除Thank you for this report. Everything is here this time. There are some grammar mistakes, but I can understand your writing. In your remaining reports, I would like you also to comment on the effectiveness of the illustrations to the story.
Hi,jeff.
返信削除Thank you for your comment.
I think grammar is different very much,but I want to stick English study from now on.
And I want to acquire ability to get one's ideas in shape.
Hi Jeff.
返信削除I want to talk about this story's illustrations.
This illustrations is cute.
I think this illustrations give pleasure for children particular.
Not onry it but this illustrations gave bubbling .
I like this illustrations.